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Kusawa Scenery topic started 11/23/2006; 1:22:21 PM last post 11/23/2006; 1:47:34 PM

24170 - Kusawa Scenery   11/23/2006; 1:22:21 PM (reads: 9662, responses: 5) Kusawa Scenery Powerful winds howling like a spoiled child Irritating sand blasting in your face Wonderful mountain looming over the campground Beautiful scenery looking like a painting Steep cliff leaning over the creek Enormous boulders ready to roll Interesting bones decaying waiting to be found Chilly lake reflecting like a mirror Ascending trail winds just like a snake in the grass Bothersome bugs biting Small creek serving as a water fountain Posted by 24170 on 11/27/06; 3:43:20 PM from the Nahanni dept. Discuss (4 responses) Discuss 25788 - Re: Kusawa Scenery   11/23/2006; 1:28:30 PM (reads: 3278, responses: 0) Hey nahhanii there was nothing wrong with your poem it was reallyyyyy good Discuss 24134 - Re: Kusawa Scenery   11/23/2006; 1:34:30 PM (reads: 3290, responses: 0) hi Nahanni your peom is very good i really like it i really like the 8th line it is relly neat because it souds just like water and a mirror put together. keep up the good work ~Casey.M~ Discuss 24179 - Re: Kusawa Scenery   11/23/2006; 1:35:47 PM (reads: 3285, responses: 0) the first line is super cool awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Discuss 24168 - Re: Kusawa Scenery   11/23/2006; 1:47:34 PM (reads: 3256, responses: 0) I like your seventh and last line alot. Discuss