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Jocelyn

Critique of Hatchet

Hatchet has a believable and natural plot the whole story flows through out the book, at the start of the book there is a lot of tension. But when Brian is starting to learn how to live in the wild there isn't that much tension. The climax is very logical and exciting there are quite a bit of questions left unanswered like “Did he ever go back to his dad’s?” The main character Brian changes a lot because he was a city boy at first and all he would really do was watch T.V. When when the plane crashed he was very unsure of what to do. In the begging he would eat berries, then Brian started to realize that he won’t live much longer if he doesn't start making things to live. Brian starts eating other stuff besides berries and he is building tools so he would be able to survive.

When he changes it is very realistic and it could happen in real life. There is really only one character throughout the book besides his mom, dad and the pilot. The author is able too create really good images in his writing. The author has really exciting critiques. The author creates exciting sentences. In places of the book it is a little tense because you want to know what happens next. He doesn't use a lot of similes he could have use one in this sentence “The smell was awful and he couldn't place it” he could of said the smell was like something.

I would recommend this book to people a little older because there is some drama and some of the writing the author uses is a little bit harsh.
Posted by 25788 on 4/12/07; 1:34:06 PM from the Jocelyn dept.

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Natural Kusawa

Polar blue water

Shivering creaturous creek winding down the mountain

Rough rocks ready to be released

Heavy wind calling us all

Rustling leaves swirling like ballerinas

Motionless mountains being disturbed

The dusky sky looking down at us

Clouds form a picture in my mind

Lords of the land

Busy as bugs having fun

Happy hikers

Kusawa
Posted by 25788 on 11/27/06; 3:43:36 PM from the Jocelyn dept.

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