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Critique of Lost In The Barrens

Lost in the barrens is an excellent, enjoyable book with lots of suspense. I would highly recommend this book. It keeps you waiting until something jumps out. The events seem realistic to me. The introduction sets the idea of the book and the scene pretty good. The plot builds lots of tension towards the climax. I also think the climax is really exciting and logical. The resolution and conclusion are complete to me they don’t really leave any questions unanswered.

There are two main characters Jamie and Awaison in the book they are very smart and intelligent. Also some other characters like the deer they meet come in and out during the book.

I thought the author had great technique all through out the book. The author created vivid images throughout the book. Most of the scenes are exciting and suspenseful and don’t lack description. Also the author uses lots of similes,metaphors and personification. If I were to rate this book I would probably rate it 9 out of 10. I would highly recommend this book to people who like suspencefull and adventerus books.
Posted by 23101 on 4/12/07; 1:12:33 PM from the Territ dept.

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Sounds and Movements of Nature

lonesome mountains sit so frozen

wind shivers on the snowy tree tops

snap of wind comes up and blows the trees

leaves fall silently into freezing air

trees stand so lonely and cold

morning echoes into the brezze

as the sun glares into your eyes like fire

soft sounds of birds in the distance

sky moves ever so swiftly

leaves fluter to the ground slowly

mountains silently loom in the rays of the sun

grass swiftly flows in the wind
Posted by 23101 on 11/27/06; 3:42:29 PM from the Territ dept.

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