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inactiveTopic The Day Zoey Got Big.... topic started 3/31/2006; 1:29:45 PM
last post 4/20/2006; 4:29:21 PM
user 24590 - The Day Zoey Got Big....  blueArrow
3/31/2006; 1:29:45 PM (reads: 8392, responses: 8)
The Day Zoey Got Big....

One day there was a girl named Zoey. She was really bored so she went to the store. She looked and looked and looked, there was nothing good to buy.

Zoey went to look at the candy aisle. Zoey saw the newest gum in town. She bought it. She chewed it all day! The next day she bought more. She stretched it, played with it, she did lots of things with it! Then Zoey ’s mom said “If you stretch it and play with your gum you will get BIG MA!”

Zoey said “No, mom you just say that because I have gum and you don’t ” Zoey ’s mom said “That’s what Elders say o.k.” Zoey said “No, they don’t I’ll even ask Grandma.” Zoey ’s mom said “go ahead”.

Zoey went to her Grandma’s house and asked. Her Grandma said “Yes, you will get BIG MA. It was a superstition for years.” Zoey said “You guys just say that to make me stop chewing this good gum! ”

20 Years Later... Zoey should have listened to her Grandma and her Mom, because Zoey has got BIG MA!

gum: THE END

By Helaina
Posted by 24590 on 3/31/06; 3:07:04 PM from the Helaina dept.

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user 24281 - Re: The Day Zoey Got Big....  blueArrow
3/31/2006; 2:00:28 PM (reads: 3554, responses: 0)
Funny story, Helaina! You should tell what "Big Ma" is.

Other than that I like your story

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user Ms. Wissner - Re: The Day Zoey Got Big....  blueArrow
4/20/2006; 4:29:21 PM (reads: 3568, responses: 0)
For those of you who read this story and don't know what " Ma" means, it is the local Native Language word for breasts.

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