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The Diamond from Las Vegas

It’s the year 1946 (after WW2), a doctor named Dr. Daniel went traveling to India with his lovely helper Ms. Martha. She came with him on a business trip. Once they arrived there they met up with their good friends Brenden, Maurisa, Bradley and Desiree. Danny said, "let's go see the diamond from Las Vegas." "Okay" said everyone. So they went off on the boats. When they arrived at the museum they met Walker, Molly, Dana and Marshall (They're good friends). After some coffee, they went to the exhibit, and the diamond was..... GONE! A masked woman jumped out the window. "Wow," gasped Bradley, "What a woman." Then the owner Mr. Jay walked in the room and shrieked, "WHERE’S MY DIAMOND! I bet you stole it ," pointing to Danny. Then Mr. Jay beat up Danny, and put him in a coma. "Mr. Jay," said Dana, "a masked woman jumped out the window." "Ya, and she stole your diamond," said Maurisa. "Oops," said Jay. "Hey Jay, will you phone the police?" asked Molly. "Yes, right now." Molly, hey Jay, what a funny joke. Everybody laughed at Molly’s joke, he he ha ha ho ho yelled everyone, hey Jay, hey Jay they chanted, what a funny joke. "Hello! police?" asked Jay, "I’ve been robbed." "Ok, calm down," said Helaina the cop, "Where do you live?" "123 Rich street, lot 31, I’m at my museum." When Helaina got there CSI was on the scene. "CSI go away!" said Helaina. "We're getting prints matched," exclaimed Grissom, "Oh, hey we have one it says - Brandy McHooligan, age: 19,born: 1927, record: stealing at the bank, spent two years in jail,lives: 123 rich street. HEY,What a minute, she lives right beside me!" shrieked Jay. THE NEXT DAY, WHEN EVERYONE LEFT, "Mayor McKnight, I’ve been robbed!" "Call me Matt, and I know because my lucky hat is missing!" "OH MY GOD, now we have to take this seriously" said Helaina, "lets go find this Brandy person." So they broke into her house and threw her in jail, somehow she escaped and was never seen in “Viva Las Vegas”, Nevada again, and Mr. Jay, he got his diamond back and sold it for 5.4 million dollars. Dr. Daniel was finally out of a coma, he and Miss Martha got married. But just then Brandy jumped in the church and threatened to hurt Martha if Daniel didn’t give her 1 million dollars!! So he beat her up and put her in Alcatraz. After that they all went out for coffee and had a good time, except Brandy. The End Posted by 24288 on 5/25/06; 1:38:26 PM from the Brandi dept. Discuss (2 responses)

Eggs For Sale

Ukrainian easter eggs for Sale. The eggs are handmade by Vanilla Bear. They're very Fragile Eggs, already been cleaned out. So come on over and check them out for yourself. When: Monday May 26/06 at 1:00 pm Where: 123 Fake Street lot 21, at Vanilla’s house Why: That’s enough questions! Eggs --> <--Eggs For Sale -An Egg with a star pattern $25 -An Egg with a Flower mirror pattern $30 Contact Vanilla at (218) 114- 4913 Posted by 24288 on 4/20/06; 3:45:35 PM from the Brandi dept. Discuss (1 response)

David Beckham Wannabee

“Clean your room” my mom said, she always wants me to clean my room. My name is Roxanne, my friends call me Roxy. “Roxanne clean your room and I will give you your allowance, $5 when you're done. I live in L.A., California. I am 15 years old. While I was cleaning my room, I found my old soccer ball, so after I cleaned my room I went outside and I saw an old lady. She was standing behind a bush and said “want David Beckham’s soccer cleats, from when he was a kid?” I thought for a moment and said “sure, but what’s the catch?” The old lady seemed surprised “ Nothing, you think there would be a catch? Just wear them and you will be as good as David Beckham himself." I really didn’t need to think about it, so I blurted out “yes”. I couldn’t believe I could be as good as David Beckham. So I raced down to the soccer field. When we started playing, my friends were so surprised. I scored against the best goalie playing, Dana Burger. “Roxy, yesterday you sucked but today you're so good, better than Dana!" "Not me,” yelled Zoey. ” You're just jealous because she’s better than you at something. That goes for both of you”. snapped my friend Sammy. But little did I know that a spy for the women’s soccer team was looking for more players. He saw me score on the goalie on that sharp turn and ran up to me and said” Want to be on the women's soccer league?” I shouted “ YES, YES YES YES YES!!” I couldn’t believe this was happening to me. The next day I went to the soccer stadium for practice, the team was huge. There were lots of people. I walked over and said “Hi” they looked then turned away. I heard someone whisper “She’s too young”. So when we were practicing all the woman were surprised that I was better than them. I scored seven times in five minutes on the team goalie Lisa, she was pretty angry, but also happy that I’m on the same team as her. I joined the team just in time, the championships finale is tomorrow. I woke up at 7:00am because I was so excited. At the game my whole family was there cheering me on. It was the second half when it happened, I missed a... goal. I couldn’t believe it, maybe David Beckham missed a goal sometimes.The bad thing was the other team got the ball at the end of the game. Roxy, you can be the goalie" says Lisa."Thanks". It’s overtime. I was goalie, oh the suspense, the horror! She kicks the ball, I close my eyes. When I open them I see the ball in ... MY HANDS! I could not believe it! Then David Beckham came running from the bleachers and said only two words... “ Nice shoes”. The End Posted by 24288 on 3/31/06; 3:22:06 PM from the Brandi dept. Discuss (3 responses)