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Shelley

Ravens

Once upon a time there was a girl named Brittany. She loved to spend time with her uncle.

One day her teacher said to pick your favorite bird. Brittany said my favorite bird is a raven. That whole day she thougt about ravens, she dreamed about ravens, she even drew ravens .She did poems about them. Her friends teased her and said ‘’raven this, raven that’’. Brittany said ‘’just because I like ravens so much doesn’t mean you can bug me’’. Her friends walked away like nothing happened.

After school she wanted to go see her uncle. When she went into the door every one was crying . Brittany said "what is wrong?" Brittany’s mom said 'your uncle is dead.’’ Brittany started to cry.

Once everyone was done crying, Brittany’s mom asked "how was your day?" Brittany said 'I had to write about my favorite bird. " Her mom asked "what is your favorite bird?" Brittany said "it is a raven." Everyone looked at her, " What's the matter?" Brittany's grandma said "raven makes the ones you love DIE!!!"

So it was Brittany's fault he's dead. From then on she hated ravens and changed her favorite bird to a flamingo.

THE END BY SHELLEY

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Posted by 23813 on 4/11/06; 2:44:00 PM from the Shelley dept.

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