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Laura topic started 10/13/2006; 1:41:49 PM last post 10/25/2006; 8:11:29 PM

24302 - Laura   10/13/2006; 1:41:49 PM (reads: 5781, responses: 1) Laura Laura was born on a cold November morning in a small forest called Birdville. Laura had no siblings. She was a very lonely girl. Laura had a very bad habit of chewing her nails. Laura`s greatest wish is for no more turkeys to be eaten. Laura likes skirts, dresses and cupboards. Laura hates roosters, cream corn and shoes. Laura is dead. When she was 19 she got cooked. Laura will always be remembered for her courage, her personality, her good looks and her kind hearted soul. Posted by 24302 on 10/17/06; 9:54:58 AM from the Chelsea dept. Discuss (1 response) Discuss Ms. Wissner - Re: Laura   10/25/2006; 8:11:29 PM (reads: 1968, responses: 0) I think that I would be rather lonely too if I had grown up in a forest with no brothers or sisters.  She sounds like she was a very upstanding turkey in her day!  I would like you to take another look at your writing in this piece and see if you can find any problems with the tenses - is this happening now or in the past? Discuss