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topic started 11/24/2006; 2:36:52 PM
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 25433 - Ode to Lemon 
11/24/2006; 2:36:52 PM (reads: 2780, responses:
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Your beauty is peaceful
Your silence is simple
I want to understand your life
A pulse of nothing
Do you feel empty?
With layers of skin
Are you trapped in a prison?
Your scent is clean and crisp
With deep pores on a soft smooth surface
Your defences are powerful
As our enemy rips out your insides
The fight is an easy win
They cringe, you laugh
Bones of seed that never break
You amaze me!
Radiance reflected from the light
Yellow strikes me as a happy colour
Intensity brutal and extreme
You are a refreshing plunge in a sour sea
Are you aroused?
Posted by 25433 on 11/24/06; 2:36:52 PM
from the dept.
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19857 - Re: Ode to Lemon
11/24/2006; 2:38:15 PM (reads: 1455, responses:
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A classic. It will be in mind for years. Lemons mean something to me now...
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24926 - Re: Ode to Lemon
11/24/2006; 2:51:38 PM (reads: 1445, responses:
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Great mood! I really like the 'pulse of nothing' and 'refreshing plunge in a sour sea'.
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