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 Thursday, January 18, 2007
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Dear Diary
Today was Lucianna’s b-day partee. The partee started great. There was a monkey! There was also a big cake and a magic man! I was the fastest runner during tag and I got to help hand out cake! I was the best behaved. I was ready to come home and prove my momma wrong, she said I wasn’t invited as a friend. Why would Lucianna invite me if I wasn’t her friend?
I was proud of my bestest behavior at the partee. When the partee was over me and my momma were waitin for my goody bag. Yes! A bracelet or a yoyo I thought. But when our turn came Senoras Ines handed me money. She told me I worked hard for it. She called me her pet. Pet? I thought I was luciannas friend. I didnt want the money. Momma grabbed my arm and we walked home. All I wanted to be was her friend. I woulda never thought they would treat me like that just because I was the daughter of the maid. My momma was right , those kind of people aren’t your friends.
Good night
Rosie
Posted by 23028 on 1/18/07; 4:45:55 PM
from the Emily dept.
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Jan. 5/07
Dear Diary,
The other day at the party, I realized that I wasn’t invited as Luciana’s friend, and that I was invited there to work. Although I had fun, it wasn’t an invite to have fun. Now I know why that little girl with the bow was telling me that I wasn’t Luciana’s friend. She said I wasn’t Luciana’s friend and I tried to tell her that I really was but now I know that I am not her friend. I am only their maid’s daughter and am probably going to be their future maid. When Senora Ines offered me the money, I felt used and just wanted a bracelet, or a yo-yo. I now know that I am not going to be more than a maid.
Posted by 23026 on 1/18/07; 4:43:17 PM
from the dept.
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Dear Diary:
This was the day of the party at Luciana’s house; with everything that I thought was great. Such as the monkey and the magician with all the kids, that I thought were my friends. Luciana’s cousin made me feel like I wasn’t part of the birthday party but, I didn’t think that she was right. I had this feeling that I was right! Things change fast though. When I thought I was having a good time, things flipped. At the end of the party I was treated as if I wasn’t invited. I should have listened to my mom. She said that, “ You shouldn’t go, you aren’t there for the party.” I didn’t listen though. I just went to the party and it ended up me being there for the help. Like my mom is to the house. She’s a maid. And I guess I am going to take after her too.
Ps. I didn’t even get a yo-yo or a bracelet at the end instead I got money.
Yours Truly,
Rosaura
Posted by 21910 on 1/18/07; 4:42:31 PM
from the Dena dept.
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Stolen Party Diary Entry Question 3 Gabriel
Dear Diary,
I learned that friends may not be true friends. I learned that things may not be what you think as they appear. People may just be using you, you might just be there to help them with something…
The party has really hurt my feelings. It was a surprise to me when the girl in the pig tails said I was not one of Luciana’s friends. So I kicked her and said I was one of her friends. I thought I was the life of the party, I was having the time of my life.
At the end of the party when Senora Ines was handing out the toys to the kids, I just wanted to have a yo-yo or a braid but instead she gave me money. I thought it was to much, then I realized that I was there to just help with the party, I wasn’t there as a guest..
Posted by 23024 on 1/18/07; 4:39:35 PM
from the Gabriel dept.
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