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inactiveTopic Descriptive Paragraphs topic started 11/24/2006; 12:03:16 PM
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user 23031 - Descriptive Paragraphs  blueArrow
11/24/2006; 12:03:16 PM (reads: 16433, responses: 0)
Descriptive Paragraphs

Descriptive Paragraphs

I woke up in a small cabin. As time passed, I adjusted enough to realize that I was freezing. I felt like I had just walked into a freezer in my summer togs. I walked across the room to check the fire. When I opened the stove, it was colder than a polar bear’s nose. Then I ran my fingers through my hair, wondering what to do, and I felt a blinding blast of pain

There was a huge bump on the back of my head. Or maybe it was. I couldn’t tell. The bump didn’t feel too high, but it extended over the entire back of my head. And it hurt like I had never imagined before.

After I got used to the bump, I decided to look around the cabin. Just like thestove, the room was freezing. There was a counter against one wall and a bed against another. A small table with a bump like the one on my head was between the counter and the bed. I wondered what it was for. Next, I decided to got outside and explore, as I had found winter gear.


Posted by 23031 on 1/5/07; 1:49:18 PM from the Savannah dept.

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